Happy and in love
I am with you
life right now
is nothing but true.
life goes on
and things go bad
times with you
were best I had
the moments are gone
and does time fly
all I can do
is sit back and cry.
how much i love
realise one day
get her back
to myself I say
I make an attempt
to set things right
earlier twas easy
now its a big fight.
shudve acted fast
i feel like a retard
getting you back
was a bit hard
just this time
lucky was I
just one way
does time fly
Saying of the day:
bamb phate
log mar gaye
koi gal nahin yaar
pandhra aur paida hue
8 comments:
A sensitive poem with an insensitive thought of the day...
But yes good writing...you should blog more often... This poetry is a good insight into another of your " skills".
Seems like you are trying to follow your intuition over rational mind which is little odd considering your views on living the life I heard from you. Let's see who is winning in coming season!
Ps: your thought of day is not at all consistent with your blog posts. It's something more than simple maths when it comes to "life".
@abhishek: I honestly wanted to remove the though of the day, I could not as people have commented on it. "skills", is something which i would like you to clarify. Thanks, Ill try to blog as much as I can.
@samir: Its not purely intuition. It is intuition based on some previous statistic. Rational thinking does involve a part of intuition. And, definitely acting at the right time, is rationality.
My apologies for the saying of the day. It may not reflect my own views. I appreciate you pointing out the difference in simple math and "life"
@everyone: My apologies for the insensitivity in the saying of the day. And, looks like I have some dedicated readers. Yayy !!
wah good work!! such a poem coming from you..for a minute I thought I was on abhi's blog.. ;)
well yeah, slowly getting towards the projected "New and Improved Tarang".
I totally respect your prespective for your comment of the day. And if it was a witty comment on growing population rate of india, i think u did a good job..
Keep it up
Everyone has his own way of thinking. Just dont let any criticism come in way of your creativity.Your apology for that comment was redundant and not called for....
Well the thought of the day doesnt even qualify to be black humor..Its no where a take on growing population..Its being insensitive towards innocent lives getting killed , and that new borns just replace them!
@ sumeet
When you would lose a close one, I shall love to see your creativity Mr.
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